Overall I am very impressed with the level of work you are both producing. It is reflecting your upskilling and research into film production skills and the quality of your work is steadily improving.
A few notes for you to work on this week before the final edit is due:
1. sound levels: go back and check background/ static noise so that sound levels are consistent and continuous 2. after FX: make sure you get your reflection scene after FX sorted as this is the real crux of the film segement, the confrontation between Christian and his tormented inner-self. 3. sound FX: I would encourage you to capitalise a bit more on the effects of sound on the audience for moments like the punch or the mirror being punched and shattering. The opening credits are a great example of the sound effects for-shadowing what will happen in the rest of the film. Use moments of high impact action-wise, to get that 'jump' effect with audience by adding in more impacting sound effects. 4. end credits need to be added 5. opening credits are very well done, just make sure the sizing of the logo isn't cutting out any graphics 6. music - great choice in music, it is successful in building suspense and shows understanding of music's role as a thriller convention. 7. Don't forget to add in the voices that Christian is hearing in his head in the corridor scene, this allows the viewer into his mind and brings more clarity to the situation, showing what is going on with the 2 world's he is living with.
Overall score for rough edit- 7/10 Very good base to start tweaking and adding to for an even better final result! Well done.
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ReplyDeleteOverall I am very impressed with the level of work you are both producing. It is reflecting your upskilling and research into film production skills and the quality of your work is steadily improving.
A few notes for you to work on this week before the final edit is due:
1. sound levels: go back and check background/ static noise so that sound levels are consistent and continuous
2. after FX: make sure you get your reflection scene after FX sorted as this is the real crux of the film segement, the confrontation between Christian and his tormented inner-self.
3. sound FX: I would encourage you to capitalise a bit more on the effects of sound on the audience for moments like the punch or the mirror being punched and shattering. The opening credits are a great example of the sound effects for-shadowing what will happen in the rest of the film. Use moments of high impact action-wise, to get that 'jump' effect with audience by adding in more impacting sound effects.
4. end credits need to be added
5. opening credits are very well done, just make sure the sizing of the logo isn't cutting out any graphics
6. music - great choice in music, it is successful in building suspense and shows understanding of music's role as a thriller convention.
7. Don't forget to add in the voices that Christian is hearing in his head in the corridor scene, this allows the viewer into his mind and brings more clarity to the situation, showing what is going on with the 2 world's he is living with.
Overall score for rough edit- 7/10
Very good base to start tweaking and adding to for an even better final result! Well done.